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[bard_linn]

People who review just to say "you made a mistake at X" annoy me. At least sugar coat it with "hey, I've been reading this story for 28 chapters and it's pretty good but you did X"

ALSO it helps if you double check your facts about X, particularly if it's say, canon material not that hard to find out.

Cloud's younger than Tifa by a couple of years indeed. HELLO. GAME MANUAL HERE SAYS OTHERWISE. Idiot.

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[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

That's the only thing I could think of, but Aeris isn't that much older than Cloud either; she's 22, which is not "a couple of years" older by any means.

[celes-grant.livejournal.com]

details aside.

Constructive crit plzktnxbai ♥

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

One of the rarest things on the net. *nod*