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Bard Linn: Hello everyone! And welcome to the last BE update before I go on vacation! Florida here I come. ^_^

Kiraya: ^..^

Bard Linn: So you all will just have to wait. :P

Kiraya: That's right, folks: unfortunately, there will be no BE update in two weeks' time.

Bard Linn: Probably more like four weeks this time.

Bard Linn: But anyway, this chapter....I am very nervous about. ^^;;

Kiraya: *patpat* It's okay.

Bard Linn: Tifa sort of took over my head. ^^;

Kiraya: But she'll be playing a part in things too, so we need to bring her in more.

Bard Linn: She's rather self-centered, even selfish in here, but I think that's somewhat reasonable considering she's a teenager still and a single child, both of which statistically tends to have a greater probability of being self-centered (though of course, not all are.)

Bard Linn: She should grow out of it eventually though.

Kiraya: Eventually. *pats Tifa*

Bard Linn: I also think its reasonable the bridge accident wouldn't have gone exactly the same way as in game, since Cloud wasn't on it as well. Different weights and all that.

Kiraya: He was otherwise occupied, of course.

Bard Linn: *nod*

Kiraya: Change one little thing, and...

Bard Linn: It has so many different consequences. :)

Kiraya: Indeed. ^..^

Bard Linn: We also have reactor fall out in here with poor Zack, whom we love to torture.

Kiraya: Hey, it's not like he could get over something like that so quickly, after all.

Bard Linn: Of course not.
Bard Linn: Hm...what else....Oh yes! How many people remember Marcus? He was mentioned before this chapter. :)

Kiraya: ... *can barely even remember that far back*

Bard Linn: Chapter 1. ^.^ This scene is actually why he was mentioned back then. Ah outlines, wonderful things.

Kiraya: I <3 our outline....even if we do diverge from it like crazy sometimes. But we always come back to it in the end.

Bard Linn: We beat it back into submission, yes.

Bard Linn: Um.....anything else you'd like to say about this chapter? I can't think of much. *is very scattered today*

Kiraya: Umm... *is somewhat distracted, too*

Kiraya: Not really, no.

Bard Linn: Well, I guess if anyone else can think of anything just drop a comment and we'll get to it eventually. ^.^

Kiraya: *nodnodnod*

Bard Linn: *runs around getting Disney shirts together for park* See everyone in four weeks!

Kiraya: ^..^


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Date: 2006-06-18 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] colortheory.livejournal.com
MOSEY! NOW we know where Cloud got that from...♥

Great chapter!

Date: 2006-06-18 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Indeed we do! XD

Glad you enjoyed. ^.^

Date: 2006-06-18 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com
*amused* Cloud, you got engaged and didn't even know it. Poor thing. Even if it's a fake engagement.

And, Tifa, you cursed yourself with that little remark. He's bound to find out now. Most likely at the worst time possible.

Ah, Zack torture. Lovely stuff. *pets him* And I love how he and Seph were picking up on each other's moods.

*makes a faint whining noise and curls into a ball* I'll wait, but if I'm a shriveled up scrap of flesh when you finally post again, it'll be your own fault. *sniffles*

Have fun on vacation!

Date: 2006-06-18 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Your comments never cease to amuse, boss. Never change!

Oh, I intend to. <3 Maybe they'll have KHII stuff down there.

Date: 2006-06-18 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rain-of-mind.livejournal.com
Wahh, great chapter! I still feel sorry for Seph. XD

I'd type more but I just painted my nails and I don't want to mess them up. XD

Date: 2006-06-18 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Seph is so much fun to mess with in minorly evil ways. >3

Now, LUMI! Surely you can do better than /that./

Date: 2006-06-18 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wayya.livejournal.com
I love Zack too! I literally squeed (if it's a verb) because of him at the beginning of the chapter. I love how he cares about others. And overcome chapter 13.

And poor Seph. It's not with that kind of experience that he will improve his public relations skills XD

*will wait patiently for the anticipated catastrophic results of Tifa's schemings*

And the typo of the day is : “Nah, I’ll do it… though I doubt the kid will ever what to talk about it again.” I'm 99.999% sure this time.

Date: 2006-06-18 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
No, probably not, but it's entertaining!

Yup, you're right. *fixes*

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