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Bard Linn: Alright everyone! Welcome back. We hope you enjoyed the emo chapter.

Kiraya: *wibbles*

Bard Linn: *sighs* YOU were the one who wrote all the ZackxAeris stuffs!

Kiraya: I KNOW. And that's what makes it even worse! I really, really like them as a couple... *sniffle*

Bard Linn: We're still paralleling canon at the moment, and hence their relationship needed to be slashed.

Kiraya: (Did they actually break up in canon?)

Bard Linn: (Hm....never said, but the way Aeris says "not serious" almost makes me think there was some sort of closure.)

Kiraya: (Unless she was downplaying it to make herself feel better about it.)

Bard Linn: (Also possible. But never stated either way)

Kiraya: (Point.)

Bard Linn: Anyway. We also hand Cloud's letters in here - actually, Kiraya wrote most of this chapter, didn't you?

Kiraya: ...yeah. You still write more than I do, though.

Bard Linn: *ignores the last* So everyone should address their praise to her.

Kiraya: Stop that, you're making me blush.

Bard Linn: Just so you all know.

Bard Linn: Nothing less than the truth, General.

Kiraya: Flattery will get you nowhere, Lieutenant.

Bard Linn: ........you sure?

Kiraya: ...no. >..>

Bard Linn: Because I could REALLY use a raise.

Kiraya: And I could use a vacation. But you can't always get what you want, they say.

Bard Linn: You're no fun. [/role play Zack mode]

Bard Linn: I absolutely love Cloud in here when he's depressed and thinking about Vin-chan.

Kiraya: We need more Vinny in here.

Bard Linn: Yes, we do.

Kiraya: Fear not, though; he shall be making his reappearance soon!

Bard Linn: But you're writing the "what the heck is Vin doing anyway" fic, yes? And he'll be in 10, IIRC.

Kiraya: Yes, on both counts. (Though the former isn't being particularly cooperative lately. Sephmuse keeps elbowing him aside.)

Bard Linn: (Smack Sephmuse.)

Kiraya: (Don't make him grumpy, I need him for 16.)

Bard Linn: (Point.)

Bard Linn: Oh wait, I did write something in this chapter. My bad, I forgot about Cloud and Zack at the bottom. >.> And here I thought I skipped out this one entirely. XD

Kiraya: How could you forget Zack and Cloud? *tsk* And their budding friendship, blah blah blah...

Bard Linn: .....because I usually reread what I don't write? *is slightly biased towards others writing*

Kiraya: ...oh.

Bard Linn: And more Seph and Zack interaction! Seph's actually developing people skills. Or more accurately, Zack skills.... >.>

Kiraya: *insert Kiraya's usual "I love Seph-Zack interaction to death" comment here*

Bard Linn: *insert Linn's usual comment about loving to write it here*

Kiraya: *insert Kiraya's wholehearted agreement*

Bard Linn: Seph smiling in this situation has to be one of the cutest things ever.

Kiraya: Seph is just... flibble. I love him so much.

Bard Linn: And yay for more screentime!

Kiraya: Heheh, indeed.

Kiraya: As things progress he'll become a more and more frequent guest on our show, so never fear, dear readers.

Bard Linn: Indeed. Oh, and I'm sure Zack fans are glad to find out his little rank jumping trick.

Kiraya: Things were different, back during the war... Stop me before I ramble, please.

Bard Linn: .....why?

Kiraya: I'm still trying too hard to work out the logistics of it. Everything, I mean. Invasion route and all.

Bard Linn: That and the impossible weather patterns.

Kiraya: DON'T GET ME STARTED ON THOSE AGAIN.

Bard Linn: Square + logistics =/= otp

Bard Linn: Hm....anything else this chapter?

Kiraya: ...I need to find a better map, though, because for all we know, it might be in the right latitudes... Ahem.

Bard Linn: We did mention Vin's coming out-er-back next chapter.

Kiraya: *cough*

Bard Linn: *twaps Kiraya for having brain in gutter. Again.*

Kiraya: ...oh stop that.

Bard Linn: But it's fun!

Kiraya: *sulk*

Bard Linn: *pats the General* You'll get over it soon enough.

Kiraya: *long-suffering sigh*

Bard Linn: You need a HUG. *Zack Glomps*

Kiraya: Lieutenant...

Bard Linn: Yeeeeeees?

Kiraya: *sigh* Never mind.

Bard Linn: Ya'd think he'd get used to this. ;)

Bard Linn: Though really, I don't think we have anything else to say about this chapter.

Kiraya: ...no, not really.

Bard Linn: Well then everyone. See you in two weeks!

Kiraya: ^..^

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Date: 2006-04-09 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibirisuchan.livejournal.com
man, I just feel bad for all of them! ;__; (snugglefluffles everybody involved...)

Date: 2006-04-09 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
*pat* Rule of FFVII: Nothing can happen without buckets of angst.

Date: 2006-04-09 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com
OMGZack! ;_; *snuggles him* *and Cloud* Poor woobies... Somehow, I forsee Zack having his hands full with his new protege. Poor Cloud, his brain is going to break once he realizes that being Zack's little Project means he's going to have to interact with Sephiroth. And poor Sephiroth's going to have to learn to interact with yet another person, all because of Zack. <3

Date: 2006-04-09 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Maaaaaaaaaaaybe.

Maybe not. >D

Date: 2006-04-09 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com
And I so totally love you for it. You make me want the next part nooowww...[/whine] *snuggles Cloud* At least it'll be a lot harder for him to hide his talents, what with a 1st-Class riding his ass under the guise of "training". XD

Date: 2006-04-09 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Oh wait two weeks. You'll live. :P

Date: 2006-04-09 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com
*sniffles*

Actually, at the rate I'm going, I'm likely gonna end up killing myself in practice. I've progressed from a bruised shin on one leg to what is most likely a cracked shin bone on the other just during the past month. So who knows if I'll survive till the end of the fic. ^^;

Date: 2006-04-09 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com
Looking back at my previous comment, it's occured to me that the last part sounds really "OMG lookitme!" ...Or something. *scratches her nose* It wasn't meant to be. So, uh, yeah, feel free to ignore that bit if you want. *facepalm*

Date: 2006-04-09 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tocasia.livejournal.com
ZackxAeris! Yay!
Sephiroth smile, also Yay!
and I still love the way Cloud is written in this fic. =)

Date: 2006-04-09 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Seph smile is love. <3

Yay! We love it when people love what we do. :)

Date: 2006-04-09 01:29 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] askerian
eeeee. I really like the beginning -- starting with two letters like this was a nice stylistic thing. (and Cloud is too cute, thinking about his mommy like that) I admit I was surprised when he still failed the exam. After all that training! ;_; pure evil.

Aeris!! eee. I love that her mother thought she was crazy for talking to the Planet at first. Never seen that before. XD

aw breaking up noes. ;_; Meanies.

Sephiroth trying to guess what a normal person should do to help a depressed friend = *squish!* ♥

Hee, I'm so glad to see Zach and Cloud starting to develop a friendship. That's so cute. *^^*

Date: 2006-04-09 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Kiraya's a genius, isn't she? Both of those were her ideas.

Yes, we are meanies. >D

Sephiroth is confused by the squishing. XD

Date: 2006-04-09 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] colortheory.livejournal.com
Uweh! They're going to be frieeeeeends.

"Personal training," mm? XD

Date: 2006-04-09 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Zack: He's not LEGAL yet! *appalled*

Date: 2006-04-09 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] colortheory.livejournal.com
XD Neither is Aerith.

Date: 2006-04-09 02:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Zack: We weren't doing any 'personal training'. :P Besides, you saw how well THAT turned out!

And he's my subordinate to boot.

Date: 2006-04-09 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowzephyr.livejournal.com
Waiii! No fair! You can't stop there!
/cries

Date: 2006-04-09 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Oh but we CAN. >D

Date: 2006-04-09 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rain-of-mind.livejournal.com
Poor Zack! Looking forward to Vinny-chan reappearing. Really liked this chapter.

I have slept like 5 hrs and haven't had more than a sip of coffee so excuse me if I'm not managing much coherence.

Date: 2006-04-10 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
XDDD *amused* You need more sleep dear.

Date: 2006-04-10 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rain-of-mind.livejournal.com
I always need more sleep...

Date: 2006-04-09 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com
*purrs at Zack, Seph, interaction, Cloud ambushing*

And Vincent's coming back. *squees*

I'm just going to melt into a pile of goo now, thankyouverymuch.... *melts*

So much love for the Zack. *cuddles him* And the woobie that is Seph. Because, damnit, that was cute. And poor Cloud, setting up his own doom. *amused*

You know the drill. Love it, wants more of it, pleads for more, and is ignored. *grins*

Date: 2006-04-10 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
*pokes goo* Ya know, I thought she was Greed, not Sloth....

Yup, is ignored. :)

Date: 2006-04-10 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wayya.livejournal.com
I loved this chapter. A lot of importants things happen, characterisation is still great (*pets Seph*) and I can't wait to see what you're going to do with Vincent. *fangirls happily*

After the second Cloud's letter, the still looks like that instead of "still", but I can't see any real typo. Maybe when I'll translate this chapter, one day...

Date: 2006-04-10 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com
Eeeek. *fixes*

Yay! I'm glad the characterization is holding up. ^_^

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