bard_linn

Very creepy, and very very good. It was quite startling, how the dialogues and Ed's confusion instantly portrayed that something was amiss, the entire first part of the fic was so strongly reminiscent of a dream I have to tip my hat off to you. It's damned hard to write dreams and make them seem as nonsensical-logical as they are, and yout transmitted that feeling perfectly through the story.

And the red candy...that was spectacular. I swear I got the chills when Ed looked a it XD!