I thoroughly enjoyed this - I think you were right to end it where you did, since at that point it's pretty much Win Condition with all of Lelouch's canon obstacles eliminated. I liked the touch of Nunnally helping Schneizel deal with paralysis (wheelchair races, LOL), and I called out "Pwned!" when Lelouch Geassed Marianne. :D
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Date: 2011-05-05 07:19 am (UTC)