Dragonprints: Fall
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bard_linnTitle: Fall
Pairing(s): LelouchxSuzaku
Rating: PG
Summary: Take Snapshots from the![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
cgkinkmemeii and add fantasy elements. For some reason, elarielf doesn't think we should burn this.
Suzaku woke up to the feeling of air whistling through his hair, while something warm grasped him tightly about the torso. He opened his eyes and found himself high in the sky, the ground so far away that the trees looked like toys. He instinctively began to struggle against the - hand? - holding him. Lelouch was going to be so mad at him. He had no idea how he had gotten here! The last thing he could remember was being in the park with Gino while Lelouch was studying...
“If you don’t stop, you’ll fall and die.”
Suzaku froze when the voice spoke. It was definitely female, but much deeper than he was used to. “Who...?”
The hand around him tightened to the point that he could barely breathe. Suddenly the shape looming over him that had been blocking out the sun shifted, bending in a way that allowed Suzaku to see what it was.
A dragon.
His eyes got very wide as he stared at the creature. “Wh-wha-”
“Cease struggling. I have not carried you this far to drop you now.”
Suzaku swallowed hard. A real dragon! Gino, Tamaki and Rivalz are never going to believe this. He did stop moving, however, as he had no desire to plummet down to the earth below. Maybe he wasn’t in trouble. Not all dragons were bad - at least, he didn’t think so. He didn’t know much about them.
The sun vanished as they entered a cave. The claw around him let him go. Suzaku gasped as he hit the cave floor hard enough to black out.
He woke up to the feeling of a brush moving over his back. To his embarrassment, Suzaku realized he was naked, and tied to a pole propped horizontally a few feet from the ground. A woman - who he remembered now seeing in the park - was standing over him with a bowl in her hand, spreading some mixture over his body. “I see you’re awake. You’re very well built.” She squeezed his butt.
“What are you doing?!” Suzaku yelped, squirming at the touch.
“Adding a little flavor.” She continued to paint him with the liquid for a moment or two more. “I can see why Lelouch was saving you for himself. You’ll be delicious.”
She’s going to eat me! Suzaku realized suddenly. “Lelouch wouldn’t eat me! And he won’t let you do it either!” Though what Lelouch could do against a dragon...
The woman laughed. “You poor, ignorant thing. You really don’t know anything, do you? What other use would he have for you? I suppose his mother’s blood might give him urges to look after a human child... but you’ll be dead before he’s even an adult.” Suzaku stiffened. “Oh, you didn’t know that, did you? Lelouch is a dragon, just as I am. At least, he’s a half dragon.”
Suzaku could help but feel betrayed at the thought. Maybe the woman was lying, but why would she? What if Lelouch really had been a dragon all of this time and had never told him? They were going to get married some day; they shouldn’t keep such important secrets from each other!
The woman tilted her head as if listening to something. “Visitors already. I suppose that was only to be expected.” She put down her implements and snapped her fingers. Suzaku’s eyes widened as flames came to life beneath him. “Why don’t you roast a bit to deepen the flavor? I’ll be back in a bit.”
Suzaku only waited until the woman vanished from his sight before he started struggling with his bonds. Unfortunately, whatever it was she had used to ‘flavor’ him was slippery and kept him from getting much of a hold. He continued to struggle, however, unwilling to give up. He had to get away-
“I know you have him in here somewhere! Give him back now, Guinevere, or else - ”
That was Lelouch’s voice! Suzaku struggled harder, making the stick bounce as he tried to successfully free himself. If he could get down they could get out of here together!
“You’ll challenge me?” Guinevere laughed. “You’re barely two decades old. You wouldn’t even be bonded if you weren’t a freak.”
Suzaku’s eyes narrowed at that, and he resolved to look into ways to kill dragons. No one got to call Lelouch a freak. He managed to shift his weight enough to move a couple of inches towards the wall. Grinning, he repeated the motion, setting the stick shaking -
Only to feel it begin to slip as the far end bounced free of its support. Suzaku barely had time to realize what was happening before he hit the flames, a scream ripping free from his throat.
:Don’t fear it. Embrace it.: Eyes as green as his own peered at him through the flames, framed by black hair. The ghostly figure of a Japanese woman held out her hand. :Take it, Suzaku.:
It hurt to breathe, even, but somehow he managed to move one of his hands forward, touching the fingers outstretched towards him. The pain vanished, a deep warmth flowing through him in its place.
Suzaku smiled, and let go.
Pairing(s): LelouchxSuzaku
Rating: PG
Summary: Take Snapshots from the
cgkinkmemeii and add fantasy elements. For some reason, elarielf doesn't think we should burn this.Suzaku woke up to the feeling of air whistling through his hair, while something warm grasped him tightly about the torso. He opened his eyes and found himself high in the sky, the ground so far away that the trees looked like toys. He instinctively began to struggle against the - hand? - holding him. Lelouch was going to be so mad at him. He had no idea how he had gotten here! The last thing he could remember was being in the park with Gino while Lelouch was studying...
“If you don’t stop, you’ll fall and die.”
Suzaku froze when the voice spoke. It was definitely female, but much deeper than he was used to. “Who...?”
The hand around him tightened to the point that he could barely breathe. Suddenly the shape looming over him that had been blocking out the sun shifted, bending in a way that allowed Suzaku to see what it was.
A dragon.
His eyes got very wide as he stared at the creature. “Wh-wha-”
“Cease struggling. I have not carried you this far to drop you now.”
Suzaku swallowed hard. A real dragon! Gino, Tamaki and Rivalz are never going to believe this. He did stop moving, however, as he had no desire to plummet down to the earth below. Maybe he wasn’t in trouble. Not all dragons were bad - at least, he didn’t think so. He didn’t know much about them.
The sun vanished as they entered a cave. The claw around him let him go. Suzaku gasped as he hit the cave floor hard enough to black out.
He woke up to the feeling of a brush moving over his back. To his embarrassment, Suzaku realized he was naked, and tied to a pole propped horizontally a few feet from the ground. A woman - who he remembered now seeing in the park - was standing over him with a bowl in her hand, spreading some mixture over his body. “I see you’re awake. You’re very well built.” She squeezed his butt.
“What are you doing?!” Suzaku yelped, squirming at the touch.
“Adding a little flavor.” She continued to paint him with the liquid for a moment or two more. “I can see why Lelouch was saving you for himself. You’ll be delicious.”
She’s going to eat me! Suzaku realized suddenly. “Lelouch wouldn’t eat me! And he won’t let you do it either!” Though what Lelouch could do against a dragon...
The woman laughed. “You poor, ignorant thing. You really don’t know anything, do you? What other use would he have for you? I suppose his mother’s blood might give him urges to look after a human child... but you’ll be dead before he’s even an adult.” Suzaku stiffened. “Oh, you didn’t know that, did you? Lelouch is a dragon, just as I am. At least, he’s a half dragon.”
Suzaku could help but feel betrayed at the thought. Maybe the woman was lying, but why would she? What if Lelouch really had been a dragon all of this time and had never told him? They were going to get married some day; they shouldn’t keep such important secrets from each other!
The woman tilted her head as if listening to something. “Visitors already. I suppose that was only to be expected.” She put down her implements and snapped her fingers. Suzaku’s eyes widened as flames came to life beneath him. “Why don’t you roast a bit to deepen the flavor? I’ll be back in a bit.”
Suzaku only waited until the woman vanished from his sight before he started struggling with his bonds. Unfortunately, whatever it was she had used to ‘flavor’ him was slippery and kept him from getting much of a hold. He continued to struggle, however, unwilling to give up. He had to get away-
“I know you have him in here somewhere! Give him back now, Guinevere, or else - ”
That was Lelouch’s voice! Suzaku struggled harder, making the stick bounce as he tried to successfully free himself. If he could get down they could get out of here together!
“You’ll challenge me?” Guinevere laughed. “You’re barely two decades old. You wouldn’t even be bonded if you weren’t a freak.”
Suzaku’s eyes narrowed at that, and he resolved to look into ways to kill dragons. No one got to call Lelouch a freak. He managed to shift his weight enough to move a couple of inches towards the wall. Grinning, he repeated the motion, setting the stick shaking -
Only to feel it begin to slip as the far end bounced free of its support. Suzaku barely had time to realize what was happening before he hit the flames, a scream ripping free from his throat.
:Don’t fear it. Embrace it.: Eyes as green as his own peered at him through the flames, framed by black hair. The ghostly figure of a Japanese woman held out her hand. :Take it, Suzaku.:
It hurt to breathe, even, but somehow he managed to move one of his hands forward, touching the fingers outstretched towards him. The pain vanished, a deep warmth flowing through him in its place.
Suzaku smiled, and let go.
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Date: 2011-05-12 04:34 am (UTC)I liked your Minizaku, I think you've handled him nicely, his reactions and thoughts on Lelouch.
Cliffhanger is evil, though:p
I wanna see Phoenixzaku [/whines like an oversized baby]
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Date: 2011-05-12 09:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-05-12 09:55 am (UTC)How could you possibly kill off such a lovely little creature?
Besides, Lelouch would be VERY upset, and that's a gigantic understatement. And Euphy would be upset, because Lelouch is upset.
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Date: 2011-05-12 09:07 pm (UTC)*urge to annihilate becomes stronger*
LuluEuphie comfort sex!
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Date: 2011-05-12 09:44 pm (UTC)*enabler mode on*
Hmm, comfort sex sounds good!
please write that LuluEuphy fill for my recent request? I wrote Suzaku to appease the comm, but he IS optional~~
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Date: 2011-05-12 09:47 pm (UTC)Honestly, not writing anything for the meme at moment (feeling a bit burnt over there) but might write sooooooomething. At you know, some point.
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Date: 2011-05-12 09:55 pm (UTC)/HUGGGGG
I like LuluEuphy. They have lovely interactions (Kawaguchi, Kamine and the final conversation before the Geass Runaway), look good together, she can tease him and they are equals and I, gladly, don't squick at such things as incest for fictional characters.
I loved how Lelouch admitted his defeat to her, and I disagree with the anons that said that he only agreed to join SAZ after the magical phrase about Nunnally.
Not even Suzaku convinced Lelouch to join SAZ, but Euphy. It was her doing too, not simply Nunnally-reflex.
It feels horribly unfair that it had to end like this and that Euphy had to be sacrificed on the altar of 00 plot. Yes, I love that story to tears, but with Euphy alive it would have been a DIFFERENT story, potentially no less interesting.
I like LuluEuphy better than SuzaEuphy, because I find it better balanced. Of course, a threesome is my dream come true, but if I had to choose, I'd choose LuluEuphy.
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Date: 2011-05-12 10:37 pm (UTC)Also, I need to remember fanfic is fun. Sometimes I worry too much about making it awesome - and a lot of the fills have been so good that I feel there's a level to meet. I'm consciously trying not to make Dragonprints work, and just be fun. I've gotten out of touch with that.
I totally agree with all you said on LuluEuphie here. <3
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Date: 2011-05-12 10:51 pm (UTC)I like all of your works, and you have many promising AU's, so I don't mind what exatly you are writing;) Just saing.
Thanks<3 I felt like I needed to express myself on the subject.
I tried to like SuzaEuphy and I failed.
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Date: 2011-05-12 11:02 pm (UTC)I knooooooow. So many AUs, so little tiiiiime!
New ending for the SAZ debacle:
L: "Make you fire Suzaku or go into cycle right now."
E: *geassed* Okay. *drags Lulu underhill for dragon mating.* XD
NOM
Date: 2011-05-12 11:04 pm (UTC)Oh, yes~~
I trust you. I mean. Woo. *puppy eyes*
Date: 2011-05-13 02:10 am (UTC)The whole set-up is awesome, but there are two lines that I adored:
"Lelouch wouldn’t eat me!" - I'm sorry I'm such a pervert, but. AHAHAHAHAHA! Hah. hah... Oh, Suzaku. ♥
They were going to get married some day; they shouldn’t keep such important secrets from each other! - ...priorities, dear. O wait, that is your priority. Never mind.
Guinevere seems appropriately two-dimensional here, enough so that I'm really just looking forward to her getting her ass kicked. (PS if that doesn't happen, I'm looking forward to Lelouch getting his ass kicked, because I always do. XD)
Thanks so much for writing this! ♥
I think every time I write one of these it gets shorter. The next is like a page and a half.
Date: 2011-05-13 09:50 am (UTC)Guinevere has like, four lines. I don't know how to expand on her character that much. XD;;
Glad you like it. <3