Butterfly Effect: Authors' Notes: Chapter 7

[bard_linn]

Bard Linn: Hello everyone! We hope you enjoyed this chapter...I sound like a broken record.

Kiraya: ...well too bad. Coming up with something clever every time is too much work.

Bard Linn: Anyway, now the General of ShinRa has made his entrance! Sephy is IN THE BUILDING.

Kiraya: He's so interesting to play with.

Bard Linn: That he is. We shall have to torment him later.

Kiraya: You like to torment everyone. :P ...then again, I'm not exactly innocent when it comes to that, myself.

Bard Linn: Pah. It's only interesting when you can come up with new ways to torment them though.

Bard Linn: For the record, by the way, we realize Cloud running into Sephiroth the way he did is pretty cliché and coincidental - but we had fun writing it, so we did it anyway. :P

Kiraya: *cough*

Bard Linn: Other things this chapter...you'll notice Scott'n'Paul showed up again.

Kiraya: They like to sneak in there. For a while there they were being annoyingly persistent about it.

Bard Linn: Until we left Midgar then they settled down.

Bard Linn: We also have more.....*claps on earmufflers and waits for squeeing* Zack this chapter.

Kiraya: And Zack + Seph interaction, mrrr. I love Zack + Seph interaction.

Bard Linn: We know, dear.

Bard Linn: We mocked the character hair jokes in here too, I think.

Bard Linn: ........for the record, I love our Zack. He's so ......silly. And I love building Zack and Cloud's relationship.

Kiraya: Hee, yes. Especially how stubborn Cloud is being about it.

Bard Linn: And a little thick. XD

Kiraya: Yes, well, the boy has his moments.

Bard Linn: Yes, and this wasn't one of 'em. Makes life fun.

Kiraya: You mean it was one of them? I meant moments of thickness.

Bard Linn: I meant it wasn't a moment of shining ...er....goodness? (This is why Kiraya is the English major)

Kiraya: At this point Vin would probably roll his eyes and mutter something about Cloud's tunnel vision.

Bard Linn: Pro'ly. Anything else?

Kiraya: Hmmm... no, nothing I can think of right now.

Bard Linn: Well then, next time Aeris makes her first appearance! So we'll see you in two weeks.

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Comments

[icedark-elf.livejournal.com]

*happily making gibbering noises*

Zack.... Zack and Seph.... Zack and Cloud..... Cloud and Seph.....

*happy sigh and melts into ooze*

[arrghigiveup.livejournal.com]

*nods frantically along with icedark_elf* o_o

[draxander.livejournal.com]

*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Ahem. *cough* Well, at least you all knew this was coming. Seph, Zack and Cloud love! Cliche or not, it was nice to read. ^-^

[mimi-sardinia.livejournal.com]

I do like the chocobo joke being thrown at Zack instead.

Good to finally see Seph for once.

[tocasia.livejournal.com]

'Sephy is IN THE BUILDING'

yay! ^_^

But what surprises me is that I really love the way you write Cloud. Good stuff.

[chibirisuchan.livejournal.com]

^________^ Pooooooor little Cloud. Can't ever catch a break, can he. This was adorable...

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

*pokes ooze*

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

XD *grins*

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

XD I'm glad you're enjoying it. ^_^

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

Of course! He deserves it too. :)

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

I'm glad. Cloud is my favorite. *hugs him* Though I like Zack and Seph too. :)

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

Not for at least....um....possibly six chapters? No, more than that.....

[rain-of-mind.livejournal.com]

*is fangirl mush*

Cloud... Seph... Zack... So much love! And Cloud's famous tunnel vision. *giggles*

How can I wait for another two weeks, now?

[colortheory.livejournal.com]

.............

*melts*

Oh, poor, poor Cloud. ♥

[salmastryon.livejournal.com]

Just discovered this today. Want more *pouts*

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

*pokes the mush*

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

Poor, poor Cloud, I feel so sorry fo-

Cloud: Liar!

...yeah. >D

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

We update every two weeks, Saturday at 8 EST, as long as real life allows. :)

[salmastryon.livejournal.com]

=) Oh goodie!

[hakainokami.livejournal.com]

On re-reading, I found my self inserting the line "Sending things to earth" before “Things, people… superior officers?” I don't know if either of you have played Katamari Damacy, but it cracked me up, and now I love that section even more.

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

I haven't and I wrote that line, but I'm glad it makes you laugh! Unintentional jokes are sometimes the best. :)

[nashidesei.livejournal.com]

This chapter, like those before it, is absolutely wonderful. Again, I love your Zack--he's just as quick as he'd have to be to associate with Seph. And your Seph, though he hasn't had a lot of screentime, seems perfect. The description of his voice, look on his face... *purrs*

Absolutely wonderful, ladies. Pure brilliance.

[bard-linn.livejournal.com]

*pats Zack* He's lovely, isn't he?

We keep trying to get Seph more screentime, but he's being a pain. *kicks him*