I'm still in the post-KH2-ending-euphoria and your one-shots are an excellent way to help me keeping that state for a while. :) They are very good, and although they're all about Sora, they're all different (yay for original POVs!) and have their own interest. And your notes were also an interesting supplement. Look, I tried to do a little comment for all my very very favorites of them!
Oathkeeper Love it! (I think it’s my favorite one). I love reflections about Keyblades. These are surely not usual weapons. They're rather characters of their own.
Sora's Mum Wouldn't have Sora's mum forgotten everything about him, like Kairi did? Thinking of it, it's extremely sad. Otherwise, I like how you show her feelings: pride, worry, hope... Well done job. Sora's Mum need more spotlight.
Elizabeth I can totally see that happening in the game. It's really sweet, and yet sad and nostalgic. Sora and Riku playing pirates... I can't say why, but it's like innocence and foreshadowing all in one. And I like the parallel between Port Royal and Destiny Island. I always wanted to have a turn at being a pirate but I never got a chance. It's okay, Sora, you're not made for being a pirate anyway. You care too much.
Demyx The last paragraph was awesome. The foreshadowing, the comparison between Sora and Roxas, and Demyx's complicated "feelings" (well, thoughts)... I love everything. I agree with kill_me_faster above, I like your theory about Demyx only sent to test Sora (and the idea of he knowing it and going anyway is... ;_; but you win for making Demyx more perspicacious than he's usually depicted in fics.)
Roxas We would make an incredible team. So true! ;_; “You make a good other” is definitely one of my favorite moments of the game. And I'm so going to read your claim.
Goofy They moved almost seamlessly together, but with light hearts, as if this was a game and not a battle. I thought the same thing! I was so glad when they were finally able to fight together and not one against the other! And Donald and Goofy just wouldn't be Donald and Goofy if they didn't accept Riku in the team. :) *resolved the potions problem by never letting team mates having any potion and abusing Curaga instead*
Riku *is distracted by the idea of a late-thirties!Riku* Hmmm, well... Err... I mean, like I said for "Oathkeeper", I love seeing Keyblades as characters, so this fic is for me some very good material of thinking. There are several good ideas inside, some kind of never-ending cycle with Keyblade Wielders becoming Keyblades and the counterparts of Light in the Darkness... Very interesting. On a total random note, Tidus training with Auron = ♥
Typo Time! (in Cloud)Having heard the unspoken request I leaft, walking from the room deep in thought. (in DiZ)I have analyzed ever item, every part to the point I know it better than my own hand.
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Date: 2006-11-21 06:45 pm (UTC)Look, I tried to do a little comment for all my very very favorites of them!
Oathkeeper
Love it! (I think it’s my favorite one). I love reflections about Keyblades. These are surely not usual weapons. They're rather characters of their own.
Sora's Mum
Wouldn't have Sora's mum forgotten everything about him, like Kairi did? Thinking of it, it's extremely sad. Otherwise, I like how you show her feelings: pride, worry, hope... Well done job. Sora's Mum need more spotlight.
Elizabeth
I can totally see that happening in the game. It's really sweet, and yet sad and nostalgic. Sora and Riku playing pirates... I can't say why, but it's like innocence and foreshadowing all in one. And I like the parallel between Port Royal and Destiny Island. I always wanted to have a turn at being a pirate but I never got a chance. It's okay, Sora, you're not made for being a pirate anyway. You care too much.
Demyx
The last paragraph was awesome. The foreshadowing, the comparison between Sora and Roxas, and Demyx's complicated "feelings" (well, thoughts)... I love everything. I agree with
Roxas
We would make an incredible team. So true! ;_;
“You make a good other” is definitely one of my favorite moments of the game. And I'm so going to read your claim.
Goofy
They moved almost seamlessly together, but with light hearts, as if this was a game and not a battle. I thought the same thing! I was so glad when they were finally able to fight together and not one against the other! And Donald and Goofy just wouldn't be Donald and Goofy if they didn't accept Riku in the team. :) *resolved the potions problem by never letting team mates having any potion and abusing Curaga instead*
Riku
*is distracted by the idea of a late-thirties!Riku* Hmmm, well... Err... I mean, like I said for "Oathkeeper", I love seeing Keyblades as characters, so this fic is for me some very good material of thinking. There are several good ideas inside, some kind of never-ending cycle with Keyblade Wielders becoming Keyblades and the counterparts of Light in the Darkness... Very interesting.
On a total random note, Tidus training with Auron = ♥
Typo Time!
(in Cloud)Having heard the unspoken request I leaft, walking from the room deep in thought.
(in DiZ)I have analyzed ever item, every part to the point I know it better than my own hand.