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bard_linn ([personal profile] bard_linn) wrote2006-06-03 06:57 pm
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Butterfly Effect: Authors' Notes: Chapter 13

Bard Linn: Hello everyone! We hoped you enjoyed this chapter - and no, we are not updating early no matter how much you beg. :p

Kiraya: ...especially since we've been kind of slow in the writing recently. >..>

Bard Linn: *cough*Kingdom_xiii themes and supernatural*cough*

Kiraya: *cough*sheer laziness and lack of muse organization*cough*

Kiraya: ...and work.

Kiraya: Right.

Bard Linn: BUT! We are getting back into the swing of things, and we're almost to the point where we have all the summer chapters done.

Kiraya: ...oh, I'd nearly forgotten about that.

Bard Linn: Well we are.

Kiraya: *nod*

Bard Linn: Anyway, this chapter is mostly all Kiraya's work and it's so good. <3333333333 *loves*

Kiraya: ...I ramble too much, though.

Kiraya: And you did Aeris.

Kiraya: I never would've thought of that.

Bard Linn: Who is, by the way, very much an untrained Cetra and does things mostly on instinct, which makes for some fun later.

Kiraya: Indeed. XD

Bard Linn: Anyway, so all Chaos-related squeeage should be directed at Kiraya

Kiraya: Hah, but you're the one who took him and ran with him and made him so awesome in-- oh, right. We haven't posted that yet.

Bard Linn: No, we haven't.

Kiraya: Well, wait till you see what she does with 'im.

Kiraya: It's delicious.

Bard Linn: He's fun to play with! He and I get along splendidly.

Kiraya: You really do. ^..^

Bard Linn: Even if he did show up HOW many years ahead of schedule?

Kiraya: ...Five.

Bard Linn: Yeah. Slight change in the outline there

Kiraya: Blame Jenova. He just wanted to play with her...

Kiraya: And you shamelessly encouraged that, if I recall correctly.

Bard Linn: I am very good at shamelessly encouraging things.

Kiraya: I had noticed that, yes.

Bard Linn: Anyway, so this chapter was much fun. And now Zack has issues.
More Zacks need issues. They're fun.

Kiraya: I like Zack having issues. They make him more cuddly.

Bard Linn: Except the whole Aeris-not-cuddling-him at the moment

Kiraya: Aeris?

Kiraya: *totally wasn't thinking that at all*

Kiraya: ... *whistles innocently*

Bard Linn: *sighs and looks to heaven asking for strength*

Kiraya: Oh, you know you love me. :P

Bard Linn: Some days I wonder why but that's another story

Kiraya: Hn.

Bard Linn: In any case...I can't think of anything more to add.

Kiraya: *spontaneous outburst of further Zack-with-issues!love*

Kiraya: Now I'm done.

Kiraya: *cuddles him*

Zack: *is cuddled by random fangirl*
Cloud and Vin: *blinkblink*

Bard Linn: Next time: More Tifa, the trip back down the mountain and ....tormenting Seph. Some more. >)

Kiraya: <3 Seph.

Kiraya: *pets him*

Bard Linn: See you in two weeks!

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[identity profile] icedark-elf.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 12:19 am (UTC)(link)
*gurbles*

I want to have your babies.

*squees at Zackissues and Choasness and -biting-, oh glorious, glorious biting*

Yep, that had all -sorts- of pretty but bad images in my head.

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Kyt took my baby rights, remember?

Out of the gutter, boss. Still gen at this point. :P

[identity profile] gypso-child.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep, that had all -sorts- of pretty but bad images in my head.

XDDDD I see I wasn't alone in that; good. Because, yes please, omg!!

(also, icon love is rampant right now, good heavens!)

[identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Eeee. ;___; Poor Zack, to be taken over like that! Makes me really, really happy that Vincent was around to knock some sense into Jenova.

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
But it's FUN to torment Zack! >3

[identity profile] artimusdin.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
But he's gotta be happy in order to counter-act all the angst given off by the OTHER guys. ;__; Lets face it, if he weren't there, we'd be drowning in angst and emo.

[identity profile] colortheory.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
*squeals of Joy* Oh, man. Poor Zack. XD

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, poor Zack. *grin*
ext_18500: My non-fandom OC Oraania. She's crazy. (One Sexy Beast)

[identity profile] mimi-sardinia.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
Yey, Chaos!

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Indeed Chaos. 5 years too early but Chaos!

[identity profile] rain-of-mind.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent chapter! Jenova going after Zack was a twist I totally didn't expect! Yay!

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad we could surprise you. ^.^ (He surprised us too, with that....)
lanerose: (FF7 ~ Zack ^.^)

[personal profile] lanerose 2006-06-04 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I really liked the whole Zack going sorta crazy thing; Vincent / Chaos transition thing was a bit confusing at first, but once I figured out what was going on, it was pretty cool. ^_^ Yay for more BE!

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-05 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
It's inherently confusing, I'm afraid. Which is nothing to mention about the CODING of this chapter, eeeek. Glad you like Zack going crazy too. ^_^

[identity profile] gypso-child.livejournal.com 2006-06-04 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I am so utterly in love with you guys, omg. That was so fucking FANTASTIC, orgasmically so, and oh, yes, everybody loves the Cloud, even demons of doom and CHAOS! (*cackles*)

Yes, well, the Chaos is love, right now, omg. BRILLIANCE. Way too much fucking fun. I also love how you did Jenova, hadn't actually seen her done that way, coherent but so fucking fractured, and it was brill. LOVED seeing Zack fight back.

And, omg, just, LOVE. *huggles you both*

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-05 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, Chaos. He's...fun to play with. >D Even if he did show up five years early. *pokes him for messing with the outline*

Kiraya gets all the credit for Jenny-chan. She won't talk to me. :)

Of course Zack would fight! He doesn't step down ya know!

Glad you're enjoying it. ^_____^

[identity profile] wayya.livejournal.com 2006-06-09 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
At last I've read chapters 12 and 13! :D

That was so totally great. After reading 12, I was expecting something with Seph (some sentences, like "And no matter how comforting the Fire materia in the Masamune’s hilt was, nothing these people had done justified torching the town" = baaad omens) so Jenova surprised me. *was gaping the whole chapter* I loved Jenova, and I loved Zack, too. This guy is simply awesome.
I won't fangirl over Chaos because I don't know enough who he is. I am a lame, lame, lame fangirl.

In the archives post, the links to chapter 13 and AN of chp 13 leads to the AN of chp 12. Just so you know.

[identity profile] bard-linn.livejournal.com 2006-06-10 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
Zack is awesome. <3

Chaos is the final form Vincent can transform into for his limit break. Gets a lot of screen time DoC.

And I think I fixed it! x.X