*Melts* Lovely. :) "He wouldn’t listen to Aunt Pinako and Winry but he would listen to me. I’d ask him softly and he would immediately stop with this terrible look in his eyes." -> I could so 'see' a close-up shot of *that* look. Man, it's a shame this (or any of your other fma fics -as far as I'm aware of) doesn't have a fanart pic to go with it.
THE best line has got to be: "We are two damaged souls but make a complete person together." lol, you have a thing for using strong lines at the end of your fics, don't you? ;)
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"He wouldn’t listen to Aunt Pinako and Winry but he would listen to me. I’d ask him softly and he would immediately stop with this terrible look in his eyes." -> I could so 'see' a close-up shot of *that* look. Man, it's a shame this (or any of your other fma fics -as far as I'm aware of) doesn't have a fanart pic to go with it.
THE best line has got to be: "We are two damaged souls but make a complete person together."
lol, you have a thing for using strong lines at the end of your fics, don't you? ;)