ext_18691 ([identity profile] kytyngurl2.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bard_linn 2005-07-21 02:50 pm (UTC)

Nice work! Brilliant twist, and special love for the 'change the country because of one death' bit. That's sad, but really true... If Roy never did those horrible things, he would not have grown up to be the person he is...

Using the POV of such an obscure character works well and earns you bonus points!

Nice! :)

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