Butterfly Effect: Author's Notes: Chapter 19

[bard_linn]

Bard Linn: Hello, all! And we hope you have enjoyed chapter 19!

Kiraya: >D

Bard Linn: In which the relationships tangle again and we generally cause problems.

Kiraya: Mmmmhmmmm.

Kiraya: But it's such FUN.

Bard Linn: Well it is, yes. But usually that's my line.

Kiraya: Well... it's no fun if we don't scramble things up a little sometimes. :P

Bard Linn: Well, I guess we'll have to go over our messes in order then. I'm fond of the scene in the beginning here with Zack. It demonstrates how sometimes he doesn't always know what the heck is going on. He's just good at faking.

Kiraya: A skill I wish I had.

Kiraya: Unfortunately, I'm a terrible liar.

Bard Linn: Yeah well, takes all kinds

Kiraya: I'm actually rather fond of the next bit with Cloud, myself.

Bard Linn: Which bit?

Kiraya: Where he's talking about the differences in training.

Kiraya: Particularly his enjoying Seph's training without the hero complex getting in the way.

Bard Linn: Yeah, that's nice. Those two are very alike in some ways, training being one of 'em.'

Bard Linn: Hm....Ah, also, I am amused that Zack's mental voice is Aeris. Especially considering she
CAN hear voices

Kiraya: Indeed.

Bard Linn: Vincent is awkward at giving relationship advice, but that's cute. <3

Kiraya: Seph's awkward at taking it himself.

Bard Linn: He is. And poor Cloud is all "AHH WHAT DID I DO!"

Bard Linn: Hm. Anything else of note this chapter?

Kiraya: Zack?

Bard Linn: What about the poor boy?

Kiraya: Um.

Kiraya: He's... fun to poke at?

Bard Linn: He is. This chapter should be subtitled "top three reasons why Zack isn't perfect" or something like that.

Kiraya: I like imperfect!Zack, though.

Kiraya: He's so much FUN.

Bard Linn: HE IS.

Kiraya: And woobie. *hugs him*

Bard Linn: Yup.

Bard Linn: I think that's basically it.

Bard Linn: Well, since we've covered the squeeing for this chapter, I guess all that's left if so remind all of you that the next update is on October 14, not in two weeks. Again, we're switching to a once a month update schedule (second Saturday at 8 pm EST) due to various circumstances.

Kiraya: See you then!


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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I love this story.
It's so hard to find stories like this were Cloud isn't a pushover, Sephiroth and Vincent aren't too unemotional and robotic, and Zack is just to perfect and all-knowing for his own good. <3 These are the same reasons I like Fusion so much. However, this one updates more, so you two are on the top of my people-to-check-list. Also, this chapter just made me feel all warm and fluffy inside. *parents are telling her to stop acting like a mad woman on drugs*
Well, I'm off to go find my brain now. Till next time.

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I'm glad! We try to work on the characterizations and make them very real, as much as possible given the circumstances. XD (Fusion is total love. <333333333333)

Yay for warm and fluffy!

I think my parents have given up on that. XD Good luck finding your brain!