eeeee. I really like the beginning -- starting with two letters like this was a nice stylistic thing. (and Cloud is too cute, thinking about his mommy like that) I admit I was surprised when he still failed the exam. After all that training! ;_; pure evil.

Aeris!! eee. I love that her mother thought she was crazy for talking to the Planet at first. Never seen that before. XD

aw breaking up noes. ;_; Meanies.

Sephiroth trying to guess what a normal person should do to help a depressed friend = *squish!* ♥

Hee, I'm so glad to see Zach and Cloud starting to develop a friendship. That's so cute. *^^*