http://reddesquelle.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] reddesquelle.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bard_linn 2008-01-28 09:54 pm (UTC)

beautiful. his master was as beautiful as he was deadly gave me shivers. This was the only correction that I could see: Sephiroth could feel the blond attempted to gather his mind,
Attempt?
other than that, Can I have some more, please?
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