“It’s not his fault you died before he was legal,”

I dunno, I just feel that it should be "It's not his fault he died before you were legal," since he 'interjected' -- seems like he said it to save Sephiroth from the pillow attack. But anyway.

Great work with this. ^^ Haha, I love everyone's reactions to the resurrection, especially Cid's. XD The title does seem ominous though. Looking forward to reading more! XP